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Our life together is a beautiful duet,
Intermittently joined,
In harmony,
By the lives of others.
The verses’ measures are filled,
With dissonance,
Minor tonality,
But the chorus is always strong.
Sweet, loving chorus lines,
Perfectly timed,
Carefully constructed,
To hold the score together.
No song could hold light to ours,
With it’s harmony,
Minor tonality,
Simple duetted perfection.
K.M. Shear
01-14-11
For my loving wife Amy.
Yes, the chorus is always strong and usually sung louder, with more gusto, holding verses together ... like friends and loved ones! You have composed a beautiful Magpie.
ReplyDeleteA chorus is just that. A moment where we can see!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCheers Mate
Poem perfection at its best!
ReplyDeleteSweet, loving chorus lines,
ReplyDeletePerfectly timed,
Carefully constructed,
To hold the score together.
Exactly so...
I can see why you have the Adult Content warning! (Well . . I can't, actually, but you know your own business best)
ReplyDeleteI do like the poem
A beautiful duet!
ReplyDeleteSubmitted to Jingle Poetry for their Monday Potluck.
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your words make perfect rhymes.
ReplyDeletelovely duets.
cheers.
Happy Belated Valentine!
A++
Hello, Thanks for the love to Poetry Potluck! You Rock!
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Your contribution means a world to us, Happy Thursday!
See you next time!
xoxox