Saturday, December 18, 2010

The Observer

The fan over the bar spins hypnotically.

Voices share stories;
Compare experiences.

I sit;

And the fan still spins.


  1. The combo of music and words is magic ... I want to visit this bar.

  2. Greetings!
    Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!

    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

    At this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

    the more you share, the happier we are,
    Glad to see you with us...
    poem on.

  3. @Helen: VFW post in Woodstock Illinois. Was sitting in their pub waiting for my Marine Corps League meeting to start, but I would assume that most watering holes are the same...

  4. @Jingle: Thanks for having me. I'm sorry I had missed the last couple weeks for submission. Unfortunately I'd been in and out of the hospital a couple times and just couldn't do much.