I am disabled myself, Kevin, and I assure you, your soul can soar beyond Pluto every time you create something, write something, paint, snap a pic, surf the web. I worked for 25 years for the Department of Veteran's Affairs, working with blinded veterans. There is hope out there, but it has to start within, and remember when dealing with the DVA; be your own advocate, and do not take no for an answer.
good, decent - the last line doesn't need the word 'my' - BTW - Thank you so much for the strings - they sound great, strung both my classical and I couldn't be happier with the tone.
Sad and beautiful....
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is WOW! I love it and hate it at the same time. Because I can feel it.
ReplyDeletecute.
ReplyDeleteMove out and make a new home! However, hauntingly beautiful Haiku.
ReplyDeleteI am disabled myself, Kevin,
ReplyDeleteand I assure you, your soul
can soar beyond Pluto every
time you create something,
write something, paint,
snap a pic, surf the web.
I worked for 25 years for
the Department of Veteran's
Affairs, working with blinded
veterans. There is hope out
there, but it has to start within,
and remember when dealing
with the DVA; be your own
advocate, and do not take
no for an answer.
Well done. The music you have playing really add to the melancholy mood. Kudos.
ReplyDeleteYour body may be restricted, Kevin, but your mind soars. Well Magpied :)
ReplyDeleteThank you all for visiting, reading, and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
ReplyDeleteDeep, dark and delicious too (in a good way.)
ReplyDeletegood, decent - the last line doesn't need the word 'my' -
ReplyDeleteBTW - Thank you so much for the strings - they sound great, strung both my classical and I couldn't be happier with the tone.
Glad they're working out for you Jhon!
ReplyDeleteI, for the life of me, can't bring myself to get rid of the word 'my'. This one was for me. ;)
I just think it is implied strongly and it feels redundant to me, only a suggestion though.
ReplyDeleteBut in your case, the caged bird sings. Beautifully, too.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tess.
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