Tuesday, February 8, 2011

River of Life

Pontoon boats and rafts,
Lazily drift through canyon passes,
Cut deeply by time, and,
Rushing currents.
Such is the way we live,
Our lives meandering through temporal flows,
Carved efficiently by past events, and,
Passionate dreams.
Crystalline waters reflect a compassionate sun,
Lax currents drive ambition,
And I am complete, content,
Penning my liquid thoughts.

                                         K.M. Shear
                                         02-02-11

Submitted to Jingle Poetry for Poetry Potluck.

4 comments:

  1. liquid thoughts?

    what a dynamic line, cheers.
    way to go!

    A++

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  2. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for the praise.

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  3. way to go shear! nice!.. here's my potluck~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/

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  4. Thanks Five. I enjoyed yours as well. I hope your future homes will not be broken. ;)

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