hey lovely post. Enjoyed this little piece very much. Last line is great. Love the music you got in the background too... this visit was a pleasure...
Cheers
Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here - http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/descent-2/ http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/06/64/ http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/30/mud-pies/
Submitted to Jingle Poetry for their Monday Poetry Potluck 11/29/2010
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lovely put..
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have fun reading some on our list.
xx
agree!
ReplyDeletehey lovely post. Enjoyed this little piece very much. Last line is great. Love the music you got in the background too... this visit was a pleasure...
ReplyDeleteCheers
Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here -
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/descent-2/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/06/64/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/30/mud-pies/
Mother nature rules indeed! :)
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Thank you all. The music is mine own. I wrote and performed them. I'm glad you enjoye yourselves, and I hope my future pieces are just as enjoyable.
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